Angel of Death

When are we going to start?

Other: can she claim Vacilis Vacilis is a free spirit, but we'll see.

Can I have two characters? Name: Vacilis Age: 205 Location: Aetha History: He use to rule under the King but he hated being a follower and broke free from the ...

7. The Hatter's Dance Yes, I know I'm not supposed to be writing anything new, but this is for contest purposes so it's alright. I want to thank Castleinthesky upfront ...

Hey Adrian!!! This was great, as always. And for your first love poem, I felt it was executed well and it was just amazingly beautiful. I didn't see any flaws ...

Welcome to YWS!!! Cool name. I'm trying to finish a novel as well, so I wish you all the luck. I'm Angel by the way, hope to see you around. ...

Ooh, a songwriter! Awesome! Hi, I'm Angel by the way. Welcome to YWS, hope you stay! So, what bands do you listen to? I like soft rock and alternative, Its ...

Hey Ash!! I'm so glad this is finally posted! And you certainly didn't disappoint. I have no nitpicks and I think that you just made this story more believable and ...

This was another good chapter but I think everything is going a little bit too fast. Since your last chapter didn't sit too well with me, I think this one ...

Here I am again!! I found a few nit-picks: Mom was acting strangely. Dad was home early from work. Both of them spoke to each other in low tones, glancing ...

Hey KJ!!! How've you been? I'm so glad you've posted another chapter because, though this was good, I really don't think I would be happy to have been left with ...

You're so beautiful! And your hair is an awesome color. Here's a recent picture of me:

Me please!!! I wanna read!!! And keep trying! ~Angel

6. Le début de vieux amours As you dahlings all know, I have went round and round over and over again, on what story I should stick with. Since I ...

Hey Ash! I liked this and the prologue (preface) gets better every time but there's just a few things that I spotted. My body was erect, tensed for when he ...